"...because children may not understand or have the ability to process the variety and amount of information available to them on the web"
Okay, it occurred to me I am not sure where it is you want to go with this. Do you mean content in general, or do you mean pornographic/violent material?
Interesting, lol that may be kind of broad? What exactly did you mean? Maybe you can go toward one specific thing "for mature eyes" and work off of that and form your claim why that would cause a parent to monitor their childs' intenet usage. Make sure you look at things from both sides...why would you monitor? why would you not monitor? and of course elaborate on those
Its a good start...maybe can be a little more specfic after "because"...I think when you say mature eyes, you mean adult content because unfortunately anyone at any age can see something that might not be appropiate on the web no matter what. Sooo is that what you mean when you say mature eyes??
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"...because children may not understand or have the ability to process the variety and amount of information available to them on the web"
Okay, it occurred to me I am not sure where it is you want to go with this. Do you mean content in general, or do you mean pornographic/violent material?
Interesting, lol that may be kind of broad? What exactly did you mean? Maybe you can go toward one specific thing "for mature eyes" and work off of that and form your claim why that would cause a parent to monitor their childs' intenet usage. Make sure you look at things from both sides...why would you monitor? why would you not monitor? and of course elaborate on those
Its a good start...maybe can be a little more specfic after "because"...I think when you say mature eyes, you mean adult content because unfortunately anyone at any age can see something that might not be appropiate on the web no matter what. Sooo is that what you mean when you say mature eyes??
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